Thursday, October 27, 2016

She-Hulk - One Crummy Ploy - Perry Kent

Panel One
Exterior, day, rainy New York sidewalk. She-hulk tries to shield herself from a giant splash of water as a cab drives by.

1. SHE-HULK: Ah, not again!

Panel Two
Interior, day, sky scraper lobby. She-hulk yells toward the nearly closed elevator as she walks into through the lobby. Her clothes are soaked and dripping.

2. SHE-HULK: Hold the elevator!

Panel Three
Interior, reception, law office. She-hulk exits a door marked "Stairs" into a reception area. The chipper receptionist greets her. She-hulk looks soaked and bitterly angry.

3. RECEPTIONIST: Good morning, Ms. Walters!

4. SHE-HULK: Easy for you to say. Do you know how hard it is for a green gal to get a cab in this city?

Panel Four
She-hulk attempts to open her office door, but the door is locked and won't budge.

5. SFX (small, doorknob): Locked!

6. SHE-HULK: Of course... Left the key at home.

Panel Five
She-hulk rips the office door off it's hinges and out of her way. She has a grim smile on her face.

7. SHE-HULK: I hope this shitty morning isn't a plot device to get me to meet a maintenace man.

- END - 

1 comment:

  1. That better not come out of her billable hours! Funny page. Very Ally McBealish...

    Egad, I feel like I just dated myself.


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