Panel
1
Exterior,
night. Spiderman lands on the perch of a building.
1.
SPIDERMAN: What's this ruckus? Wait. Do people still say ruckus?
2.
SPIDERMAN: What's the hap? Much cooler.
Panel
2
Spiderman
is shocked to see another person fighting the bad guy.
3.
SPIDERMAN: What the hap! That's me!
Panel
3
Reveal:
Other Spiderman, with a slightly different suit (maybe brown
highlights?) than the Original, swings around the bad guy on a length
of web. The bad guy pumps a giant flame out of his fist like it was a
flamethrower, trying to hit the Other Spiderman. Around the outside
of the activity is a ring of cop cars, lights flashing blue-red.
4.
SPIDERMAN (OP): Or someone who looks a lot like me. And can sling
web. And has impeccable style choices.
Panel
4
The
Other Spiderman snaps the bad guy's neck. The flame sputters out.
Panel
5
Spiderman,
back on the perch, jerks away from the scene in horror and disgust.
5.
SPIDERMAN: What the hell?!?!
- END -
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