PAGE ONE.
1.1: Opening on a
perfectly normal suburban house in a flat suburban street.
CAPTION: Everything
changes and recycles.
1.2: Inside the
house, in the living room to be precise a family plays with an INFANT on a play
mat. GRANDMA, GRANDPA, and MOM sit around the baby on the mat. The baby is
kicking and cooing and generally being happy.
CAPTION: But
certain things stay the same. That’s where hope lives.
1.3: Pan to the
left of the previous panel and there is an UNCLE, AUNT, and FATHER of the
infant. They’re watching the infant’s 1-YEAR-OLD cousin stomp around like
Godzilla through some blocks.
CAPTION: In
the sameness. When you feel like change you throw out what didn’t work and try
something new.
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