I thought this might make a good story of hope. It warms my heart every time I see something like this in the news.
Panel
1
Exterior,
day. A
man, wearing a kippah,
walks along a
city
sidewalk in a suit. He is on his way to his synagogue.
1.
Man (caption): Things
have gone so wrong lately.
Panel
2
The
man steps around the corner, his back facing the reader. In front of
him is a large group of people gathered
outside of his synagogue. They are holding signs that can't quite be
made out.
2.
Man (caption): Sometimes
it
feels like we're
moving backward,
into
the darkness.
Panel
3
The
man holds his head high, ready to plunge into the sea of "protestors".
The "protestors" are still very indistinct, so we
can't tell their emotions or why they're there.
3.
Man (caption): We've made it through before.
Panel
4
The
people make a path through the crowd that the man walks through. We
can't tell the crowd's emotions or why they're there.
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Panel
5
The
man faces the crowd of people. He
is standing on the steps of his synagogue.
4.
Man: Thank you all.
Panel
6
The
crowd is revealed. They are a happy group of people there to support the synagogue attendees. They are holding signs
with slogans such as "We Stand Together", "Friends
of all Faiths", and "Peace and Goodwill". A strong
multi-cultural mix to the crowd to show this isn't just one
community or religion, but a large gathering of many groups.
5:
Man (caption): But it's easier to face the darkness with friends.
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