Panel
1
Interior,
night. Damian Wayne, in the Robin outfit, assumes a fighting stance.
Ringing him are five
unsavory types in
clown makeup and ratty clown costumes.
Some
of the villains have knifes and one behind Damian has a pipe.
They are in a warehouse filled with boxes.
1.
DAMIAN: I'm sick of you clowns. But I'll ask again: where's your
boss?
Panel
2
A
pipe smacks Damian in the back of the head, knocking him forward.
2.
SFX (pipe): CRACK!
Panel
3
Note:
The art should be doubled and offset, as though Damian has severe
double vision.
Damian
lurches around avoiding a swing from a villian. A dark, unseen figure
(Batgirl) pulls two villians out of the panel.
[NO
COPY]
Panel
4
Note:
The art should still be doubled and offset, but less than the last
panel.
Damian
smacks one of the villians in the face with a haphard punch. A dark,
unseen figure (Batgirl) kicks
another guy in the background.
3.
SFX (punch): SMACK!
Panel
5
Note:
His vision is mostly clear, but there should be some double-vision
doubling still.
A
figure in a dark cape (Batgirl) walks towards Damian, though the
figure is still mostly cloaked in shadows. The reader should be lead
to believe that this is Batman, come to rescue Damian.
4.
DAMIAN: I know... You told me not to go after them alone. But
I had to.
Panel
6
Note:
His vision is totally clear now.
Batgirl
steps into the light of the warehouse, revealing that it was not who
Damian thought. Damian looks surprised to see her.
5.
BATGIRL: Not
listening to the big guy, huh? Been there.
6.
BATGIRL: Next time, try a bit more more stealth. Less likely to get
suckered by a pipe.
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