(Another piece featuring my ‘ROBOT VIKING NINJA PIRATES’ concept. This takes place after they’ve discovered they’ve acquired ‘robot scurvy’ – that is, they’ve started rusting. A trip has been taken to an island to try to acquire citrus fruit in order to make a cleaning solution to fix the problem. The trip has not exactly gone smoothly.)
Panel 1: The landing team is rushing along a path, with E-DRONES carrying baskets of CITRUS FRUIT. CAPTAIN ODIN is signaling for the robots to keep moving.
ODIN (1): Let’s MOVE, people!
ODIN (2): That thing is close, and I don’t expect it to take it’s sweet time…
Panel 2: Large panel as a female ARACHNOSAURUS REX bursts through the treeline with a roar.
F A-REX: grOAAAHHHRRrr!!!
Panel 3: Close up on ODIN as he looks towards the A-REX and begins to draw the swords on his back.
ODIN (1): (Downplayed) …getting here.
ODIN (2): Ah, (‘Censored’ symbols.)
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